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September 7th, 2010
Fifty-nine sweaters and I arrived at the deviantART headquarters today. It sure is big here. We were left in a hallway for a little bit (I could peek out a crack) but we got stacked against a wall somewhere.

I'm a little scared.


September 13th, 2010
Today, a man opened our box. Since I was on top he grabbed me and held me up and looked at me critically. "Perfect!" he said, and I couldn't help but blush.


September 14th, 2010
I got moved away from all the others and stuffed into a little box. It's really, really dark in here, because there's no light coming in the cracks. Now I'm definitely scared, but at least it's all warm and cosy.


September 17th, 2010
There was a whole lot of jostling today. It's half exciting, half terrifying.


September 21st, 2010
I've arrived! I woke up to the sound of tape ripping, and then the box being thrown open. The light was blinding, but I quickly saw the grinning face of a girl. She squealed and threw me around her, so my sleeves wrapped around her shoulders.

I think it felt like a hug.

(I'm not scared anymore.)
This was written for the deviantSTYLE contest.

I adopted the perspective of a sweater, and tried to imagine what it would be like to be delivered. I tried to make it somewhat childlike, with emphasis on the fear and relief. And happiness.
:heart:

:dalove:

(200 words exactly.)
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:iconsayuri14:
Sayuri14 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Student Writer
I couldn't help smiling all the time while I read this :) Truly wonderful!
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:iconumbrella-xx:
Umbrella-xx Featured By Owner May 29, 2011
First thing to make me smile all day. :XD:
Cute. :aww:
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student Photographer
:) Smile more often!
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:iconumbrella-xx:
Umbrella-xx Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2011
I will try. :)
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Photographer
:thumbsup:
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:iconsomebodylost:
Somebodylost Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
NICE.
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student Photographer
:XD: Thank you.
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:iconpulbern:
pulbern Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You have the imagination of a god! I like that. :giggle:
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Student Photographer
:love: Thanks!
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LAvenus79 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice... :D
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Student Photographer
:tighthug: Thanks.
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:iconffavatarbender:
FFAvatarBender Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010
:aww:
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010  Student Photographer
:love:
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:iconffavatarbender:
FFAvatarBender Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2010
:meow:
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:iconghostgray:
ghostgray Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Student General Artist
so adorable!!! I want to get a sweater now!!! congratulations!!!
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010  Student Photographer
:glomp: Thanks!
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:iconcalicograce333:
CalicoGrace333 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
ha ha ha...
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2010  Student Photographer
:D
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:iconcalicograce333:
CalicoGrace333 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:XD:
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:iconnikolicious:
Nikolicious Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think it felt like a hug

That was quite lovely <3
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student Photographer
:love:
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:iconchibi-cupcake:
chibi-cupcake Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was adorable :iconiloveitplz:
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student Photographer
:tighthug: Thanks.
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SpinkellaSapphire Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010
Wow, congrats - your piece won! :D
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student Photographer
:glomp: Thanks!
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:iconspinkellasapphire:
SpinkellaSapphire Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010
You're very welcome! :D
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Student Photographer
:aww:
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:iconillusionality:
illusionality Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thats terribly cute :happycry:
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student Photographer
:aww: Thanks.
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EmmaVirus Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010
a-awwwww! That's so cute~
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student Photographer
:love: Thanks!
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mymusicmylife12 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010
aww, it's cute!! congrats by the way too :3
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student Photographer
:hug:
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:iconkyaserin-sama:
Kyaserin-Sama Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I loved it :love: I lurved it, and congrats on the win as well my fellow dA'er... lol
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student Photographer
:love: Thank you.
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:iconkyaserin-sama:
Kyaserin-Sama Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Your very welcome! :tighthug:
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Student Photographer
:hug:
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:iconkyaserin-sama:
Kyaserin-Sama Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
:~D
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Danapher Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010  Student
Congrats on the win!
Really adorable story:]
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student Photographer
^^; Thank you.
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:icondanapher:
Danapher Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student
You're welcome:]
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Student Photographer
:love:
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:iconkweenmaeve:
kweenmaeve Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
love it! jealous that i didn't think of it first :) good job!
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student Photographer
:aww: Awh, thanks.
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BeenKilledFree Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You defiantly deserve the win! :) this is really good.
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student Photographer
Thanks a lot. :faint:
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:iconsilverbeam:
silverbeam Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
awe, so cute! I like how you captured teh emotions in the story. Gratz on the win!
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student Photographer
^^; I appreciate it.
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:iconsilverbeam:
silverbeam Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
sure!
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:iconjonathoncomfortreed:
jonathoncomfortreed Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Student Photographer
:D
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