When the dark flood came,The inspiration: I'll probably do this song twice or something, because I only captured part of what this song makes me feel. There's an apocalyptic element to the lyrics, obviously, so this picture is meant to recreate the destructive theme of the lyrics. The other part that I want to work on is the symbolism of the eyes, but that's not what this one is about.
we wrapped ourselves inside a dirty blanket,
citing different opinions
on whether we should move.
When the houses came,
they ate up everyone like they were fishes,
saying, "Come on, come on
it's the end of the world."
And then I saw your face.
You're turning skin into a dirty secret;
I watched the beauties, watched the fire
And the fire burn the beauty in their eyes.
When I took the blame,
we layed in ruins trying to quote your phrase.
We're yelling, "Someone's got the answers,
but I'd rather think there's nothing to be found."
If you knew I was dying would it change you?
So when you see me falling backwards down the wall that says I'm still alive,
Don't be cautious when I'm cautiously approaching on the other side.
Everybody has their reasons, that's the reason we're all going to die.
Because if seeing is believing,
Then believe that we have lost our eyes.
When I fly solo, I fly so high.
Don't touch me now.
We all deserve something.
& we'll set fire to dandelions, just to see how well they burn.Amazing, eh?
Just watch; the world is ending now, this is the time to learn.
So tell me, do you see it now? Do you see how fragile this world is?
Upon these now-charred dandelions, it's time; make your wish.
I truly think it was a creative idea to burn the dandelion. I would think it'd burn immediately, but you snapped the photo at a perfect time. I like that the burning Dandelions are clear and crisp, while the sides blur out a bit. Creative, as well. I certainly would never have thought of it.
Overall, I think you did a good job. C:
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