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She Sings of Life

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        They speak of a tree, deep in the forest, where the sunlight barely filters to the moss-covered ground and the birds flock to the sky. They whisper of a silence, a stillness and shyness and of the blooming of flowers long forgotten in the mists of time. They shout of power, of the seed and growth, the potential to reach the skies, to challenge heaven itself in the lofty reaches of vine-encircled limbs. They chant of chaos, lost in the far-flung reaches of the twisting rivers
                and they dare to believe.

        There is a tree.

        A tree that sings of the joys of the earth. A knotted cedar, a towering oak, a silvery maple, she has long since faded from sight. But she sings of triumphs, of  beauty and love, the powers of creation alive in the world. They say that this tree exists in unknown solitude, the piercing eagle’s cry echoes in her hollows, the burning sun trails its fingers on her bark. She sings of the spirit, the living and the dead,
               the forgetting and the forgotten.

        They say her song is beautiful, an unchallenged portrayal of the world, bewitching, entrancing. They say that her song is so beguiling that no one fails to fall victim to her tales of warmth and intimacy, of sighs in the morning light, the reflection of the setting sun in her lover’s eye. She is just a tree and she sings, she sings of life.

        And I found this tree, alone on my journeys. I found her standing, unremembered, in the uproar of the forest, in the disorder they call life. The sun kissed the leaves and the wind rustled her hair. I found this tree.

        She was screaming.
Inspiration
Before you faint from my brilliant creativity ;p, I’d like to note that I did not come up with this idea at all. My friend ~SafetyXPinXSurgery had a dream similar to this, and he told me about it. I was flabbergasted and insisted that he write it down as a poem or short story. But he wouldn’t. And I just couldn’t let such a beautiful artistic idea go to waste. So I hope he’ll forgive me for “stealing” his idea. He’s a brilliant artist, but for some reason he just wouldn’t use this dream of his. :shrug: I think it was amazing.

That was my only inspiration for this; I just wrote what I imagined.


Technique
My favourite part, of course, is “She was screaming.” Powerful line, no? When ~SafetyXPinXSurgery said that to me I nearly fell over, seriously. I tried to expand the idea to be a reflection of life, not just the environment. Do you think my portrayal of the tree as a girl is okay?
Speaking of which, what did you think? :D I’d like some comments, this is just me trying to improve my writing skills and any sort of feedback would be great.


Special Mentions
~SafetyXPinXSurgery inspired me to write this.


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B1L2U3E4's avatar
One word, wow! :la: